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Arthur's POV

After Peter finished applying the bandages on Arthur's wound, Alfred helped him stand up and went with Arthur to assess the damage to the ship. One of the masts was broken and there were a few holes in the side of the ship and the deck.

"Damn. Fixing this is going to take weeks." Arthur muttered, a hand on his chest over his wound, and banging his other hand on the railing.

Alfred put his hand on his captains shoulder. "We'll work as fast as we can to fix the ship."

Arthur growled and stared at the horizon. "I hate to think of what the Bad Touch Trio will do to her."

"I know." Alfred said. "Me too."

You're POV

Gilbert pulled you down the halls of his ship. You didn’t bother trying to memorize the turns he made. It didn’t matter. Nothing mattered any more. Nothing.

Finally Gilbert stopped in front of a door. He opened it and pushed you in.

"Zis vas your room ze last time you vere vith us." Gilbert said.

You didn’t say anything, just stood there.

"You're going to have to speak sooner or later, frau." He rubbed his forehead as if he was getting a headache.

You couldn’t, wouldn’t speak to him. Never again. Arthur was gone and along with him went your voice. You weren’t going to let this man hear you talk. Gilbert stood in the room a while longer, hoping you would speak. When you didn’t, he turned to the door.

"Have it your vay, frau." He said. "Someone vill come fetch you for dinner." With that, Gilbert was gone.

"Finally." You muttered to yourself. "He left me alone."

You walked over to the bed that was in the corner of the room. You lay on the bed and closed your eyes. You were tired and extremely stressed out. I mean, why wouldn’t you be? First the one person you loved was cut down and then you were kidnapped again. You just wanted to sleep. You wanted to run away into the darkness and the silence.

You woke up to someone shaking you awake. You looked up and saw green eyes looking down at you.

"Arthur?" You said, but no sound came out even though you felt yourself mouth the name.

You bolted up and your hand flew to your throat. You really weren’t able to speak anymore. You tried to say more words. Nothing happened. What the hell? Did you literally lose your voice? Did Arthur's death really cause you to lose your voice? But you talked just before you fell asleep!

"Chica? What's wrong?"

You turned to the voice. It wasn’t Arthur. Those green eyes you saw belonged to one of Gilbert's friends, the one called Antonio Fernandez Carriedo.

You mouthed the words I can't speak.

"Lo siento ¿Que?"

You glared at the Spaniard, mouthing the words again.

Antonio sighed. "Why don’t you write it down?"

You threw your arms up in frustration and shook your head.

"Have it your way." Antonio said. "Oh, chica. I came to get you because dinner is ready." He walked out of the room. "Come on." He said, standing outside the door.

You huffed and followed him out. He led you through the halls. Eventually you entered a room with Antonio. Sitting at a table was Gilbert and Francis.

"Zere you are (name). Ve've been vaiting for you." Gilbert said.

You glared and sat on a chair as far away from Gilbert as you could, which ended up being next to Francis. To be honest, you didn’t know which one was worse.

"Ohonhonhonhonhonhon. Long time no see, mon ami." Francis said.
You started to mouth the words what are you talking about?. But you caught yourself halfway and stopped.

"Vat vas zat, frau?" Gilbert said, noticing your lips moving.

You growled but no sound came out. You mouthed the words again. You knew Gilbert would be able to hear you. His cocky grin slowly turned into a glare.

"Zis isn’t funny, mädchen." Gilbert said. "Speak damn it!"

"Gilbert… I don’t think she's faking it, mon ami." Francis spoke up. "If she was, I would 'ear the slighted whisper from 'er."

"Zat's impossible. I heard her screaming ven I pulled her avay from Kirkland's ship after I cut him down." Gilbert said to Francis, speaking as if you weren’t there.

Tears stung the backs of your eyes as the mention of what happened earlier that day and you clenched your fists.

"But it is possible, mon capitaine. I've 'eard about this 'appening before." Francis said. "Our dear girl 'as become a mute."

"Your absolutely sure?" Gilbert said, not wanting to believe it.

"Oui." Francis replied.

"Oh! So that was what you were trying to say before!" Antonio said. "I can't speak! I get it now."

Three pairs of eyes turned to the Spaniard and glared. He just grinned and held up his hands in the universal "I surrender" gesture.

Gilbert turned his gaze on you. "Vell, (name). I do hope you get your voice back soon. It vould be quite troublesome for you not to speak to us. So find your voice quickly, frau." He grinned.

You stood up abruptly, the chair behind you calling backwards and you bashed your fists on the table, shooting the Prussian a glare that said it's not that easy. Then you stormed out of the room, slamming the door behind you.

You wanted to get lost. The tears that threatened to spill over before did. You made random erratic turns. You hated this. You wanted to be back with Alfred and Peter. You wanted to continue your training. And most of all…

You wanted Arthur.
Well, I got over my blockage. and as promised, the next two chapters of the pirates bride!! Enjoy!

Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 5: [link]
Chapter 6: [link]
Chapter 7: [link]
Chapter 8: Youre here.
Chapter 9:[link]
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:iconcrystallynx:
crystallynx Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Student Artist
phhttt,..................I need anger management classes........Table Flip RAGE 
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lovina-mayavargas Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
//*you're. I don't mean to keep leaving corrections as my only review . . . I truly do enjoy this story.//
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hetaliaireland15 Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*can't speak lost voice for real from all the shouting i did towards this story*   :3
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BadTouchGirl Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Verdammt! Prussia let me bitchslap you!
:slap: revamp 
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teamedward4ever1326 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
Well...I don't know what to sa about this....should I be happy they won't hear my voice Or should I be sad Arthur won't?
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Mitchie98 Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist
HELL YEAH I WANT ARTHUR.
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CIChantea Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Don't actually want to speak to Gilbert... thats one thing to be glad about.
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AshREvans Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student Writer
i suppose! XD
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xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh dear...
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:iconashrevans:
AshREvans Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Student Writer
lol. what?
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:iconxxartimisxx:
xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Student General Artist
The BTT are being huge jerkfaces, and reader-tan is really upset over Arthur...
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AshREvans Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Student Writer
ja. she is.
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NekoNekoGirl04 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The BTT's group song (yes, they have an official song together) came on as I got to the end of this chapter... XD Nice work, can't wait to see what happens next~ ^^
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AshREvans Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Student Writer
send me linkssss i must listen!!!!

thank you.
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NekoNekoGirl04 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Here's a video with English subtitles: [link]
Unfortunately, there's only one song... In case you're wondering, that is their official Japanese voice actors. :meow: You should check out all the other Hetalia character songs, they're really good! (Listening to some of them right now...)

And, you're welcome! ^^
:icongrin--plz:
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CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my... foreshadowing was put in here~ XD Well, well, I hope I make friends with the trio even if they did kidnap mee.. :3
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AshREvans Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student Writer
probably not. lol. I mean... not when you find out what they did to you.
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CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
True... oh well. More love for Arthur~
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AshREvans Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Student Writer
Unless you dont like what you find out. haha
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CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
True.. I'll just wait and see
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AshREvans Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student Writer
siiiii
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fizzyfruit Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013
GAH!!! IT'S DRIVING ME NUTBURGERS!!!
I'm reading your comments and I'm increasingly getting freaking TERRIFIED!!!
What did Ze Awesome BTT do to me? Why my voice run away? Why homework so boring?

Why you make story so BLOODY AMAZING?! Haha, the things fan-girling does to you... =D
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AshREvans Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Student Writer
lol. well, answers in order

1. read chapter ten if you havent all ready, you find out what the BTT did to you.
2. its a psychological thing that i learned about in my AP Psychology class. You lost your voice because before you fell asleep you swore that you werent going to talk to the BTT so when you woke up, your voice was gone. its also attributed to stress, extreme about of stress. and thus my psychology lession is over.
3. because homework is homework and no one wants to do it.
4. i dont know. haha. i dont think my writing is all that good... >_>
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Aiohon12 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student
oh wow so many things happened....now I gone mute


good job
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:iconashrevans:
AshREvans Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
haha. thank you.
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Aiohon12 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student
welcome:)
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animefan1394 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
I don't think I would mind being mute. I don't really talk that much anyway. Just give me music and I'm happy.
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AshREvans Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
i probably wouldnt mind it either. im the same way only throw in my boyfriend along with my music.
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:iconanimefan1394:
animefan1394 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Mine would probably try to torment me. We have a pretty silly relationship. Lol.
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:iconashrevans:
AshREvans Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
i know the feeling. >_< however im the tsundere one. not him. lol.
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animefan1394 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Lol.
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Mac-and-Cheese72 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
AWWWW
Love it.
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:iconashrevans:
AshREvans Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student Writer
haha. thank you.
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Azu-nyan136 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
OH NO? I CAN'T SPEAK? SHITAKE MUSHROOMS! I can't even shout out rondom things now!! My random bar decreased! NOOO!
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AshREvans Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student Writer
lol. yes you can. just no one would listen to you. lol.
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Nerdzilla101 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
;-; But I like talking. I talk too much.
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:iconashrevans:
AshREvans Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student Writer
i doubt that. lol. its just conversation. lol.
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Nerdzilla101 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
But now I'm muuuuuuuuuuuuuuute. I don't like this at all. ARTHUR MY LOOOOOOOVE. SAVE ME FROM THIS HELL.
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AshREvans Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
maybe he will!
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Nerdzilla101 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I hope he does. c':
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:iconashrevans:
AshREvans Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
lol. youll just have to wait and see.
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Nerdzilla101 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
nsf;kgvlerkn.fnp'kvsl;dfehnw

Waaaaaaaaaai. XD
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:iconashrevans:
AshREvans Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
cuz i love torturing you. lol.
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Brivinci Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh no can't speak?!?! This is horrible! :O
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AshREvans Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student Writer
haha. maybe youll find your voice again soon.
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Brivinci Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope so DX
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:iconashrevans:
AshREvans Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
you shall see!!!
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:iconbrivinci:
Brivinci Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
good I guess I wont be blind then jk
all right I'll just have to wight and see. xD
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AshREvans Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
exactly. lol. but maybe you will become blind when you find out what happened to you before. i mean, it made you lose all your memory about arthur. and the BTT but who would want to forget them when they did terrible things to you?
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Brivinci Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
O.o oh my god! Now I am excited for the next chapter xD
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